Love Wistful Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Love Wistful

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Love wistful as elusive hurtful
Rousing to tears in the eyes
When coalesces into oceanic vast
of sorrow bequeathing love intoned.

It was a love that I raved up
That reasoned yet unreasoned
For the lust for love intense
As swallowed by the reeks of loneliness

When I steeped in love inextricable
That happened to happen being rocked up
Like a rainbow reasons to the rain

As i promised but to take away from her
The sorrows from her sweet slumber
as all washed away at the dawn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 September 2007

Your love of the English language is most apparent in this bitter sweet poem about the highs and lows of love. I enjoy the way you use metaphors of nature in order to express the feelings you share so honestly. A fine poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Ewigi Liebe 08 September 2007

Interesting piece of work....love reading it.. thanks for sharing. Best regards, Mary

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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