Friday, August 29, 2008

Loving A Soldier Comments

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i'm laying in bed now
its lonely and cold
trying to sleep
it's endless and old
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mary catherine
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Fay Slimm 06 October 2008

This is such a heartfelt few lines that the reader will feel your pain and lonliness along with you. Your honesty in writing stands out Mary. A 10 from me.

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Andrew Lockley 29 August 2008

a very nice & sweet poem

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mary catherine

mary catherine

minneapolis, mn.
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