Low Blow Poem by Lehlohonolo Selai

Low Blow



As a man I died
Right after your face I punched
As a man I ceased to be
Along with the dream we used be

Should roses ever loose thorns
Then I might be your friend
For now love went on a journey far away
In a desert paved with thorns

I picture your face love
Before I knuckled it down into new forms
Before I rendered new colors to it
Red, black and purple

I loved you before
Yes I still do you know
Yet fear and pride swing me about
Much more than they did before

As a man I died
Right when complements changed to insults
As a man I ceased to be
When you, my first dropped to least on my list

Wednesday, November 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: gender
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem is against gender based violence and is inspired by women who under go this struggle in life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tlotla 29 November 2017

Wow this is interesting... Keep up....

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Gajanan Mishra 29 November 2017

love went away on a journey far away, good one

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