Sunday, August 21, 2005

Lucid Comments

Rating: ★3.0

All this talk of lucid words
waking in my dreams
come across, i need to see..... somethingness
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Jill Barron
dream waking
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A Harrie 22 August 2005

I agree, the last part doesnt fit, the rest of the poem reads of wonder..why am I subjected to a dreamless state but the last is complete frustration...maybe this was your intention? good write though and one I enjoyed.

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David Gerardino 21 August 2005

I like the poem, but the last part throse it off, still very good....

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Jill Barron

Jill Barron

San Gabriel Valley
Jill Barron
Jill Barron
San Gabriel Valley
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