Saturday, January 9, 2010

Lucky Comments

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Everybodys lucky
Lucky to have a family
Weather you like it or not
No matter how you came into the family
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Rachael Wai Ai Ching
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Christian Navarro 09 January 2010

your poem is nice... good topic for a twelve year-old. i suggest you read more from dictionaries and encyclopedias to gain more knowledge..

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 January 2010

'Weather you like it or not' i think this should be 'Whether you like it or not' anyway, you have a fine piece right here!

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