Wednesday, August 22, 2007

Lullaby For Dylan Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dream your dreams my little boy
dream them while you can
For all too soon my little boy
you will be a man
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Lorraine Licona
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Dion Francis 26 August 2007

this is well done indeed! ! ! Nice work

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Adeline Foster 22 August 2007

Well done! All the hopes and aspirations of a mother come flowing through in truly enjoyable verse. Adeline

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 August 2007

Beautiful, lullabyesque poem...Very well delivered with absolute heart-warmth, and much passion....Mellifluous construction...smooth as silk.Solid Work. ~ FjR ~

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