Saturday, January 16, 2016

Lust Wrong Time Wrong Person. Comments

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I was trying to steer clear of the type I adore
Refrain from where I've went wrong before
Lad about town with that criminal behaviour
In the long run he will not work in my favour
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Daniel Bates 20 January 2016

You have poetically penned a shared sentiment of many of us, howere I doubt many could say it quite so eloquently. Well done.: -)

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Pamela Sinicrope 16 January 2016

Another poem about tenuous and intimate relationships that are misguided and dysfunctional. There are some great lines in this poem such as 'Shallow outlook I have as nice looks make the package Cant contain myself from misbehaved Baggage' Thanks for sharing.

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Ceri Louise Baylis

Ceri Louise Baylis

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