She whispers in his ear sweet nothing.
Looks upon his eyes, sees right through his lies.
Sits upon him to feel his warmth beneath her.
Lays besides him only to feel him near her.
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I got an almost-laugh from the last line.
I happened upon your site by mistake while heading for Lora Colon.
To MyPoemList.
Nice. But in 4th line I'd use lies beside.
I'd say she got lucky when he left her. So did she....got lucky.
bri :)
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I got an almost-laugh from the last line. I happened upon your site by mistake while heading for Lora Colon. To MyPoemList. Nice. But in 4th line I'd use lies beside. I'd say she got lucky when he left her. So did she....got lucky. bri :)