Sunday, May 4, 2008

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Having made the error
thinking I knew you
must I reavaluate
personal levels;
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Ralph Acosta
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Jurietta Duraan 04 May 2008

Aesthetic to the eye and ear.... very good use of words... good flow... good lines... hhhhmmmm, I like it.

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... but no error made with this poem Made the error; very, very well-crafted, indeed!

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Ralph Acosta

Ralph Acosta

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