Mah Love............... Poem by kaavyaa kriday

Mah Love...............

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I'm in love with a boy
who loves me so deep
his confession of love is so sweet
in his wrinkled dreamy eyes
he showed me my world inside
with words ushering love
like the monsoon rain outside
his tears reveals his depth of love
which is as pure as d heart of a dove
he brings me love, he brings me light
he brings me a new meaning to my life
a life with all colours of spring
with his love on my heart strings
never before i saw my life from this point of view
i pray to god- dont let our love be just a mrning dew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

good flowing write...flowing as your love... ...'like the monsoon rain outside his tears reveals his depth of love'... my prayer is this much only you leave him not in full monsoon condition always! good piece, Ambika...i liked...Why not a ten?

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