Majestic Mountains

Rating: 4.8
The mountains rise above me…
Whenever do they not?
If I went climbing every one
And carved my name in every top,
Would the mountains know their master?
Would they bow or sing my name?
Would they crumble to the ocean in grief?
Or would they care,
No, they wouldn’t care, or grieve,
Or try to shake me off in anger.
Only sit their patient as God
Waiting for me to tire and come down;
So they could be taller again,
The arrogant bastards.
Saturday, August 30, 2008
Frank Cannon 14 December 2008
A grappling hook securely placed allowing your reader to rappel across part of the human psyche. Majestic.
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Sadiqullah Khan 24 September 2008
i feel small when surrounded by mountains, , but as Rocco says, , there is a lot of balance in nature, , good nature poetry with a difference
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Wandering Scarlet 19 September 2008
another amazing thought, love how you seem to put a lot of emphasis on the balance of nature, and how it always seems to fit back into place (or at least that's the vibe i'm picking up) please keep writing
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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 September 2008
Ooooohhhhh! What a great thought! What a great imagination......terrific stuff man. I bow before your wisdom....10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Dee Daffodil 10 September 2008
LOL! This one is very good! I love the surprise ending! ! : -) Hugs, Dee
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a heavy dose of dialectic materialism administered as placebo excellent write my friend
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Nathaniel Booker 06 September 2008
I've never been much of a mountain climber but after reading this interchange of mountainous accomplishment, I think I just may... Very philosophical my friend. **10** Be Well
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Greenwolfe 1962 04 September 2008
I had voted this a 9. But on further consideration, I went back and gave it a 10. The philosophy here, just does not end. GW62
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