The Struggle

Rating: 4.9
God.
God?
Ha!
Statement, question, scoff,
And who’s to say what’s wiser?
Parents, Peers, Pundits?
Ha!
Me.
Me?
Sigh…
Saturday, August 30, 2008
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COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2018
Yes, it's a struggle indeed. That sigh at the end is eloquent.
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Wandering Scarlet 19 September 2008
i am not quite sure what to pick up from this one, but i am still quite intrigued by this, just wondering if there is any meaning beyond the words you have written? if so please tell me :) -ROCCO
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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 September 2008
Deeep and thought provoking....very very special poem
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Dee Daffodil 10 September 2008
Short...but that was a very deep sigh at the end! Nice! Hugs, Dee
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Greenwolfe 1962 04 September 2008
This has never happened before. I have never given two 10's. But sure enought, that's what I just did. Of all the writings I have read on Poemhunter, this one is the only one, that I think Emily Dickinson would have just loved. GW62
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and who shall be my surgeon and remove spleen of envy greed..... indeed me me me and perhaps me
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That's fab!
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