Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Make Believe Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my make believe life
I fall in love with everyone I meet,
even with strangers
my heart falls at their feet.
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David Harris
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Fay Slimm 10 December 2009

The warmth you show is not make believe David - - keep feeling love and it becomes a shining part of life - - with you in knowing love is the only worthwhile way to go.... a lovely honest verse and thank you - - - 10/10 Fay with a hug.... X

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Adeline Foster 09 December 2009

David: Some of the thoughts in this one is the goal of many of us when remembering back to the years gone by. You might enjoy my 'Memory Is a Cheating Thing'. Then again, you may find 'Pole-Vaulting' more intriguing. Adeline

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Carol Gall 09 December 2009

sometimes make believe is easier to live with i know i spend lots of time there good write 10

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