Thursday, January 2, 2003

Man In The Moon Comments

Rating: 3.0

Moon in your splendor,
Shine your light on me,
Blue moon, half moon,
Makes no difference,
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Melba Durham
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poetry lover 12 January 2007

I like it but I do think it can use a little revising though

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Lara-lee Lyn 11 June 2005

this poem is about this womens love for men and that moon I think she could have done better cause this poem is sort of sappy

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Melba Durham

Melba Durham

Vineland, New Jersey, USA
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