Marital Bondage Comments

As this poem describes with far too much punctuation! get rid of the commas in mid sentence, just how marriage should NOT be. Suffocation and hostage situations should be only in the news headlines, not marriage vows. Marriage to the right person is pure ecstacy imo. Loved it myself...Good advice you give here, just a little editing will make it a perfect....NEVER get married poem. Smiling at you, Tai, just testing...