Monday, March 30, 2015

Mary's Trapeze Comments

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Mary can't catch her death from tornadoes
As she sits on the cage with a swing of her legs
They whisper upstairs for a change in the weather
While young Daddy Bling lights a fire to caress.
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P V Harrington
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 March 2015

U have captured the scenes and matters very poetically in awesome freeverse description and style. Enjoyed reading this extraordinary poem on routine stuff. Thumbs up. Pls do review my latest poem too titled mother natures. .....

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