Thursday, October 16, 2014

Matter That Never Matters Comments

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Matter that matters to bitter
the betterment is shutter
that shoots the chest - right
in the middle of the heart.
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Vakeesan Sam
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Tajudeen Shah 16 October 2014

dear poet, what would that matter that matters not much to the bitter matter that might have mattered betterment, though matters not much this matter compared to the bitterness of betterment that matters matter not any better.. hahah a sharp target to establish a thought is being duly attempted by the poet. but the poetic artistry deserves a lil bit more care, and sure these limited lines invites one to read again, and engage in interpretations too. good penning. God bless. see if you can, please, review my latest two posts here. God bless. thanx.

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