Thursday, June 23, 2005

Maybe Love Will Be Like Driving Comments

Rating: 5.0

'how fucking
trite, cliche, (add in
anything you'd like here) , '
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Travis Bowden
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Poetry Hound 23 June 2005

Pretty darn good, Travis, although you veer periously close to cliche in a couple of ways. The image of a person all alone drinking whiskey and smoking a cigarette is not terribly original. Also, having a conversation with your reflection has been done before. But you pull the whole thing off nicely.

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Amy V 23 June 2005

i love it

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