Saturday, August 8, 2009

Melodies Of Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel the gentle breeze
caress my cheeks
as we walk along the sand
near the closing of the day.
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David Harris
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Allenika ... 25 August 2009

while reading your poem, i imagined as it was in reality. like Mark Lewis said, the poem brings the beach to life! thanks, i really loved it.10+++++

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Carol Gall 08 August 2009

i listen to your poem almost hear the melody

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David Harris

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Bradfield, England
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