Melting Shadows Comments

yet with folded eyes pierced by the flitting pains when mirrored by the rays waking all the shadows as tears deluged as if defiled by the sorrows Meaningful verses...of your rich and deep thoughtful poem..I really enjoyed few of your poems and like most of them as you seem to me semi philosophical poet and the innovation is found in your ideas as well the way you express.. flow of poem is perfect...10+++++++++++

It's hard to believe it's time to go Leave this way of life, spread our wings and grow Say goodbye to those friends that we hold dear to our hearts Shedding tears for we'll be so far apart Remembering all the good times and even the bad Including the fights we sometimes had Through the tears and the pain Friendship was our gain We stuck together through sunshine and rain, laughs and shouts We found out what true friends were all about So as our year comes to an end We'll carry in our hearts our special friends And take with us all the memories that were made Since that very first August day.

Sometimes natures wonders can take your mind of some sorrows. sometimes? *10 *! Thad