Saturday, November 21, 2009

Melting Winds Comments

Rating: 5.0

The melting winds of tomorrow
are dissolving my dreams today.
The aspirations that I reached for
are crumbling in my hand.
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Patrick A. Martin 22 November 2009

The melting winds of tomorrow will find us all in those last few breaths of our time here. I no longer fear them I have no regrets, no amends I'm afraid to make and no resentments to hold on to as the wind melts me away. So I'll just live for this day and enjoy reading your magic verse......10

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Alison Cassidy 21 November 2009

You wear your heart on your sleeve in this melancholy poem, David and your 'melting winds' beautifully describe the angst you feel. I'm sure your words will be read by many who nod their heads in recognition. It's certainly reassuring to read the hint of hope in the final few lines. A wistful little poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Patti Masterman 21 November 2009

I am afraid someday the entire world might melt away too. (smile) Hard to escape it's vast hands sometimes, isn't it?

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Carol Gall 21 November 2009

melting winds great writing this morn david 10

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