Thursday, October 30, 2008

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i sat in my room covering my ears
i felt his pain, i felt his tears.
i heard the shot, i heard the screams
i began to wish it was all a dream.
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halliebird gibson
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Jordan Stephens 06 November 2008

Very well written poem.....Keep writing!

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Fiona Davidson 30 October 2008

This was a hard one to read because it is so well written it evokes an echo in my heart....thank you for sharing....

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