Monday, August 3, 2009

Memories...Of Carmel By-The-Sea Comments

Rating: 2.9

She prays her deeds are sanctuaried
In the storage room of time
..Every indiscretion silenced
Should the tapes of time unwind
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James B. Earley
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Shirley Woods 19 August 2009

Hey Jim, Loved the old version, and I love the new one and there's still that hint that there is something more behind this which is tantalising to your readers. Thanks once again for a wonderful poem.

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James B. Earley

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