Sunday, September 1, 2013

Mind Control Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please do not ignore me.
When all else fails I am truly all you'll have.
Do you dare to live without me?
Do you dare to take me for granted?
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Sarah Alexander
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Bri Edwards 27 September 2013

Is it really? that made me wonder. do you mean is the mind really controlling? a unique, almost-convincing poem. is your mind trying to control MINE? thanks for sharing. i score it good; maybe it's better.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 September 2013

without Truth, without the blessing of Almighty we are empty vessels and only we are sounding much. good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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