Minor Lift; Major Fall Comments

Your poem is beautiful! The title is eye catching. Stresses and strains will be there in a relationship. The best is to be kind and broad, ignore the deficiencies of the partner and make it work. 'Even though I act like I don't care, For you to do the same, isn't really fair..' - You have expressed yourself well through these lines. That's a very polite way of expressing oneself. 'Do you ever wonder if what we had was ever really there? ' - If not he, you certainly do! 'Is it all ready time to say 'lets just move on'? I guess I'll leave the ending up to you: / ' - Nice!