Thursday, January 3, 2013

Mirrors Comments

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Of the many objects of vanity
The mirror is the most deceptive
It offers distorted reality
To the viewer who is therein reflected
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Bob Bradley
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Adeline Foster 29 July 2014

Very good, the thought is carried very well. rhyme is. Rhyme is great without being affected and meter is really good until the last line. As a poetry teacher I’d like to suggest the last line could read: To limit ourselves by what we see (space, capital I) In a mirror.

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