Very good, the thought is carried very well. rhyme is. Rhyme is great without being affected and meter is really good until the last line. As a poetry teacher I’d like to suggest the last line could read:
To limit ourselves by what we see
(space, capital I)
In a mirror.
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Very good, the thought is carried very well. rhyme is. Rhyme is great without being affected and meter is really good until the last line. As a poetry teacher I’d like to suggest the last line could read: To limit ourselves by what we see (space, capital I) In a mirror.