Friday, September 25, 2009

Missing Piece Of Me.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I really don't know if what i feel is real
There is something in me that wants to reveal
I hope and believe that it is you in thee
Whom I wanted to see in the future with me
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Dolly Poserio
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Nikunj Sharma 25 September 2009

Nice theme, nice imagery, good poem...however some wrds can be cut to make it lean and more appealing....

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Dolly Poserio 25 September 2009

thanks! i think im in love.. lol!

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Mubeen Sadhika 25 September 2009

Heartfelt expression. Neatly flowing. Nice narration. Deserves 10++++

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