Monday, August 20, 2007

Missing You Comments

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The things I did to be with you
Some things I thought I'd never do
These shameful things only make me see
Just how selfish I can be
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Dan Jones
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RyuOh Kenshin 20 August 2007

Nice poem, it has a lot emotion in it and you capture the essence of missing someone dearly.

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Melvina Germain 20 August 2007

I like this 'Missing You' poem, heartfelt thoughts stated here, you paint a sad picture indeed, excellent poem Dan.--Melvina--

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