Mistake Poem by jan fuentez

Mistake

Rating: 5.0


Everything is a hoax
Not for real, not sterling
No genuiness, a mistake
If only I could make it posiible
I would turn back the time
To have peace of mind
Accepting what's real or not
And I will be totally free

December 4,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 03 December 2008

past mistakes...only on the forward motion of time, we get to know things we liked were how much ingenuine and unreal...it's true, often we wish we could run back the time...a good meaningful write in well framed lines...ten for you, Jan...

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