Tuesday, October 6, 2015

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Rating: 4.5

No one can fill the void that you left
I have this gaping hole in my chest
I spend my nights awake while I weep
I'm having so much trouble falling asleep
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Luis Steven
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Chinedu Dike 20 October 2015

Lovely memorial and tribute to a mum, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart. A nicely encapsulated piece of poetry with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Luis. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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