Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Moments In Darkness Comments

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Without resolution and without hope I slide into the oblivion of despair,
Residing in the caverns, of restlessness, my soul is beyond repair.
Hope is dangled before my love lost eyes,
And then betrayed in a myriad of questionable lies.
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Mark Graham
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Vino Venitas 30 June 2012

This was a really nice piece, I loved how the piece focused on your current you and not how you got there. You had a really nice way of describing your state of mind. NIce piece ... good job

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