Monster Poem by slam metalpuppets

Monster

Rating: 5.0


How low
do i have to go
to get you to see
the monster
inside of me
but you still love me
why
so unconditional
but I'm trapped
in a metal case
made of strings
like a metal puppet
painted in
but your still here
i can see you through the window
in my case
with the thinner
taking away the paint
destroying my monster

copyright 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeannie Ann Clark 03 January 2008

On a more positive note...you might like 'Puffy Pillows Block Out Halo'. Keep writing; Remember, expressions are revealing...thank you...

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John Nightingale 03 January 2008

intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

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