slam metalpuppets

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Monster - Poem by slam metalpuppets

How low
do i have to go
to get you to see
the monster
inside of me
but you still love me
so unconditional
but I'm trapped
in a metal case
made of strings
like a metal puppet
painted in
but your still here
i can see you through the window
in my case
with the thinner
taking away the paint
destroying my monster

copyright 2008

Comments about Monster by slam metalpuppets

  • (1/3/2008 8:34:00 PM)

    On a more positive might like 'Puffy Pillows Block Out Halo'. Keep writing; Remember, expressions are revealing...thank you... (Report) Reply

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  • (1/3/2008 8:29:00 PM)

    intriguing. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 13, 2008

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