Monster Poem by slam metalpuppets

Monster

Rating: 5.0


How low
do i have to go
to get you to see
the monster
inside of me
but you still love me
why
so unconditional
but I'm trapped
in a metal case
made of strings
like a metal puppet
painted in
but your still here
i can see you through the window
in my case
with the thinner
taking away the paint
destroying my monster

copyright 2008

Thursday, January 3, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: trapped
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeannie Ann Clark 03 January 2008

On a more positive note...you might like 'Puffy Pillows Block Out Halo'. Keep writing; Remember, expressions are revealing...thank you...

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John Nightingale 03 January 2008

intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

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