Thursday, November 5, 2009

More Than The Stars. Comments

Rating: 4.5

More than the Stars.

We are human, so fragile so breakable,
But when you entered my life, it was unmistakable.
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bethany jeffreys
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Allan O 07 November 2009

another beautiful poem...you have a very fine talent beth....thank you ~^..^ perhaps if i request you might read my one called Revelations...i would be honored to have your comment....thanks again ~^..^

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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

That was a sweet sentiment...i loved the 'before.........moonless night' line. that was sexy. wonderful write! flowed very well.

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