Friday, October 23, 2009

Morning Stirs. Comments

Rating: 4.9

Along with fresh bread smell begins bright day.
As morning draws blinds down nightime affairs,
I, from my bed, catch first shining light - rays
Of sunrise breaking, then I breathe in new air.
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Fay Slimm
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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

It's like a pre-diary of your day. You should write a poem for each day and save it. What an idea. I never thought of such a thing before. I might have to try it..(smile)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 23 October 2009

A wonderful picture you paint Fay, I'll swap a cornish sea view than a cold morning in an old lancashire mill town any day :) Andy 10

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Lynda Robson 23 October 2009

What a warm comforting picture of morning you paint Fay, I can almost smell the coffee, lovely poem 10 Lynda xx

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Carol Gall 23 October 2009

sounds like a start to a wonderful day you descibe so well 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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