Morning Stirs. Poem by Fay Slimm

Morning Stirs.

Rating: 4.9


Along with fresh bread smell begins bright day.
As morning draws blinds down nightime affairs,
I, from my bed, catch first shining light - rays
Of sunrise breaking, then I breathe in new air.

Trundle of milk-van, halts with a purpose.
Then daylight yields to familiar calls.
Morning stirs early when baker's hand thrusts.
Cool folk move faster before sun's heat palls.

Shriek now from seagull that knows kitchen sound
Which wrestles with radio's tuneful air.
Soon fisherman chatter takes time, around
Cooked breakfast, which I hear in progress out there.

Stirring fresh coffee, my eyes scan the sea.
Diamonds light path as his boat heads for port.
Morning now broken, brings new chance for me
To value each moment this day will have brought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

It's like a pre-diary of your day. You should write a poem for each day and save it. What an idea. I never thought of such a thing before. I might have to try it..(smile)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 23 October 2009

A wonderful picture you paint Fay, I'll swap a cornish sea view than a cold morning in an old lancashire mill town any day :) Andy 10

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Lynda Robson 23 October 2009

What a warm comforting picture of morning you paint Fay, I can almost smell the coffee, lovely poem 10 Lynda xx

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Carol Gall 23 October 2009

sounds like a start to a wonderful day you descibe so well 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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