She visits me when the lights are out,
when the sun is loving another
part of the world.
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I liked the poem. Some of the words ran together. I wasn't sure of the effect of that. I like it when words are mixed and turned around and sometimes run together so that they roll off the tongue. But I wasn't sure about the choice of words running together in this poem. I would like to see more. Thank you.
This poem is simple yet it so perfect.well done