Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'd rather look to the sky for answers -
she watches the world and provides the rain,
while books are closed and suddenly blinded -
they have no concept of blossoming change.
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Chris Wrzesien
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Chris, this is so flowing and descriptive in every way. It almost sounded like music as I read down the page. Looking to nature for answers certainly seems a great idea to me. Humans seem to be too complicated. Lovely piece. 10 Karin Anderson

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