Saturday, November 26, 2011

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BEFORE the sunrise,
mother gets up at 5,
to start her chores,
for husband and sons,
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renu Vig sharma sharma
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G Shyam Sundar 28 November 2011

hmmm.........the poem was nice......i liked the first half of the verses........which are so good and when i read those lines it reminds the daily work which my mother does, i am sure 'you are having the knack of writing poems on topics which are so touchy and closely related to family.......so when a person who is away from his family reads your poem can get rid-off the home sick. Nice work and do it. with best regards G.Shyam

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