Louie Thompson

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Moving On - Poem by Louie Thompson

You don't know what it's like
to feel like you're the only one.
I feel like my life has cast a shadow,
and now there's no more sun.

I feel so alone
and no one is there.
Sometimes I feel like my life
is too much to bare.

I don't want to do this
or take this anymore.
So I'm leaving this place,
and shutting the door.

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Comments about Moving On by Louie Thompson

  • (4/23/2006 5:38:00 PM)


    I can assure you Louie, when you do close that door, another will be sure to open for you. Nice crisp work. I hope to being doing the same as your title suggests, quite soon now! 10 from mover and shaker! Tai (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 23, 2006



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