Sunday, March 22, 2009

Moving On Comments

Rating: 5.0

Excitement
Lies ahead
Preparations begin
Items emerge from
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Nia Williams
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Stephen Peter Mills 15 April 2009

what i like about your poems Nia is that you can go back to the and read them over and over again, finding something new and interesting everytime, there's a lot of 'space' in your poems, which gives the reader the opportunity to lose themselves in your poem. In this poem, the line 'the space we once called home' is very powefull, and i can visualize it with ease..well done x

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