Monday, November 23, 2015

Mr. Macklin's Jack O'Lantern Comments

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Mr. Macklin takes his knife
And carves the yellow pumpkin face:
Three holes bring eyes and nose to life,
The mouth has thirteen teeth in place.
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David McCord
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bradley brad 31 October 2024

I love men

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elisha 15 September 2022

hi my elisha

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elisha 15 September 2022

hi

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elisha 15 September 2022

hi

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: l hi 25 October 2021

uhh

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joscelyn ramirez 30 October 2020

like to carve pumkinens

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Kayla De la Rosa 30 October 2020

Mr. Macklin's carves his pumpkin.

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Logan wyatt 30 October 2020

The guy in the video mentioned repetition rhyming and I forgot the last thing was

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cortavuez 30 October 2020

i like it was cool what thay did.

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dookie dookie dookie

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keyshia gutierrez 29 October 2020

funny and scary cause i can imagine him laughing weird

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freddy fazbear 27 October 2020

it was not scary unuf

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Braylen Walker 26 October 2020

I think it was funny but scary at the same time.

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iglllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyhorrible

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Hallie Phillips 26 October 2020

it was good i liked the first part the best

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Hallie Phillips 26 October 2020

it was good i liked the first part the best

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..... 22 October 2020

it was pretty ok for poetry and I like poetry

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Ariel 20 October 2020

Good poem and scary.

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deven 13 October 2020

this is a description of carving and the look of the jack-o-lantern

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Ariel 20 October 2020

yeah it is

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hunter 01 October 2020

that was good that was awsome that was cool.

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