Mr. Macklin's Jack O'Lantern Comments

I love men

hi my elisha

hi

hi

uhh

like to carve pumkinens

Mr. Macklin's carves his pumpkin.

The guy in the video mentioned repetition rhyming and I forgot the last thing was

i like it was cool what thay did.

dookie dookie dookie

funny and scary cause i can imagine him laughing weird

it was not scary unuf

I think it was funny but scary at the same time.

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it was good i liked the first part the best

it was good i liked the first part the best

it was pretty ok for poetry and I like poetry

Good poem and scary.

this is a description of carving and the look of the jack-o-lantern

that was good that was awsome that was cool.