Wednesday, September 24, 2014

Murmur Of A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was looking for perfection
lost without a direction
felt how he was neglected
till he faced the unexpected
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Mohammad S. Babaei
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Chinedu Dike 24 December 2019

A poignant bit of verse elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Mohammad.

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Moslem Ezzati 25 September 2014

In a word, great, this poem is coming from heart. thanks :)

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