Friday, October 3, 2008

Musing On Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a wonder of life on legs,
Who can walk with the sun or the rain in her hair
In the freshest of air, and can gaze on such medley
Of beauty that baffles my mind
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Fay Slimm
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Kris Smith 01 January 2009

That poem is so good and so full it is impossible to take in in one sitting will have to read again Thank you Fay 10 +++ Chris

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Kevin Eaglesfield 05 October 2008

Hi Fay.I think this is beautiful with all my favourite feelings and sensations in it.

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Ian Bowen 03 October 2008

Fay, a most enjoyable read with so many good lines. 10/10 Ian

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 October 2008

A wonderful muse of how much beauty can be found in life... Andrew 10

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Lynda Robson 03 October 2008

Beautiful Fay, a delight to read, this piece flows and is full of love, 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm

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