My Confession (Pt.2) Comments

you are the lord of words you are the wise man indeed a wise man who guide the lords what if the lord is wisdom feed? my brother who muse the words to be written let the seas tears and rain from a heaven be the prophet of the romance be the saint of ignorance kill the devil in disguise, be the angel in Eden be what ever you want your sins will be hidden every deed we take in case of bad or mistake for that we Confession sometimes the god forgive which concern forbidden.... whip the sins out and karma that unbidden the god is mercy for that we pray and confession Your Big Brother; Ahmad Almontashri

This is really good, very good rhyming and so interesting to read... thanks for sharing, a very original poem.