My Decietful Angel Poem by Tyrone Wingfield
My Decietful Angel
She came to me too hurt to tell
Some would say beyond repair
But I did all I could to make her well
And gave her love and care
I helped her find her confidence
And gave her all I had to give
In return she gave me acceptance
An a much needed reason to live
I gave her my heart and soul
Without a second of hesitation
I vowed no matter whatever toll
She would be my destination
But she decided to abandon me
And left me here, hurt and bleeding
I cant believe that this can be
I've been praying that Im still Dreaming
Every promise and ever plan
Every aspect of my future might be gone
But I will not give in to the demand
Of letting go and moving on
I loved her then and I love her now
And I know that cann never be changed
I will devote all I am to find out how
She and I can be rearranged
I dont know much of the fight Im in
Or even the enemy Im facing
But after this love did begin
How can I let this be the ending?
Even a blind idiot would find it easy to tell
That I will never stop loving My Decietful Angel
I love the tag, Deceitful Angel. It moved well and your structure was good. After reading your profile, I would have expected darker. It seems to hover. Not that you forced it, but may have been numb when writing it. I read about love and heartbreak, and while I can relate completely, that's what I did, relate, not feel yours. It's a passionate subject, love, betrayal, abandonment. Your rhyme scheme was great. You didn't betray it, and that's a tough balance, wanting to say something, and having to be particular about your words. Overall, good piece. Thanks for sharing.
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5/9/2024 11:35:57 AM # 1.0.0.1119
All the poems of yours that I've read from A to Z are just breath taking. The rhyme scheme that's in every poem. You get your point across in every stanza.. and in some of these poems I almost cried because i know who they are about. and some of the comments that were left on the heartbreaking ones are pretty depressing i have such a great urge to tell you that i'm sorry for all the heart break that i've given and all that I've done to you over the time that we've been together. You've always deserved the best, and at times i feel that that's not what i'm giving you. You deserve so mmuch better than me. You don't deserve heartbreak no betrayal no nothing that would bring you to tears. There's this man that i fell in love with a while back, a man that until this day i will fight for, bleed for die for. There is no other man but you. ~ Mrs.Wingfield