Wednesday, March 22, 2006

My Destiny Comments

Rating: ★5.0

When I am happy,
bustling with successes in life,
When my dreams are fulfiiled,
with love and riches I desired,
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Jay P Narain
destiny
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Elya Thorn 27 April 2006

So true! The last part is such a great conclusion, I love the way you have built this poem, and also the comparison to an ocean wave! It's obviously your writing is for the mind and for the heart aswell! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
Jay P Narain
Jay P Narain
Bihar, India
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