My Fantasy Poem by Mitzie Holstein

My Fantasy

Rating: 4.0


You look at me with dark brown eyes
Eyes that say, 'I've known you all my life.'
I look at you and your deep, sunken eyes look almost like mine

Everytime I see you
You never keep conversation
Yet you say, 'Hi, how are you? '
I must have met you before
In another life? Maybe

I still hope to see you tomorrow
The next day and the day after that
You make my days enjoyable

Suddenly you're no longer there
I search for you in the valleys of my mind
You are etched in the 'Kodak' part of my memory

You! with your beautiful dark skin and short curly hair
Your height does not matter to me
If only I could see you
I would tell you how much I feel
This unforbidden love can't be for real

I am dumbstruck now that you have appeared
Your big beautiful smile is thrilling me to my very bones
I feel very happy and I hope you won't take my quietness as an insult

I want to jump, cry, run
Yet I can only smile
Cause with you there's no space, no time!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Will P. Litter 26 April 2008

Your poem sounds like very tender longing, yet just with sparks (in a way) . Nice!

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Mitzie Holstein

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Jamaica; West Indies
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