Tuesday, December 7, 2010

My Fear Takes Over My Depression Comments

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This depression causes me fear
causes the fear in life to come out
the fear or confusion and the fear of loss
I try hard not to think of fear and this depression
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Juliana Willsey
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Sandy Player 07 January 2013

good how you repeated certain words and phrases; emphasises the whole returning to fear quite well. and its good how the fear grows in the poem.

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Juliana Willsey

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