My Friend's Story - Suggestion Needed Poem by Richa Dhodi

My Friend's Story - Suggestion Needed



Daily I meet challenges
Challenges to stand high
I never deny for hard work
But together it leads me to pain
When nothing rewarding knocks at my door

I feel now
Demoralized
As nothing satisfactory
Comes on my way

My reviews show me weak
My results show be behind

Don’t know
Why I choose this field
As this makes me
Sad every moment
Or I make myself sad
Thinking I m losing


(Any Suggestion for my friend)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

Take strenght from your souls. Disappointments always come in our way like passing clouds. Wipe them out with confidence; self-reliance. You will win......

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Gurpreet S. 14 November 2008

hey richa... nice one.. seems like it reflects your life and you've taken some wrong decision.... im not good at it but i feel we can give it a lil more 'poetry' touch....jst play around with words..

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