Thursday, March 26, 2009

My Girl Birthday Comments

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Make a wish on birthday

Make a wish and give it wings
Dreams of bright and beautiful things
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Patrick 'the pyropoet' littrell
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Trevor Irwin 21 April 2010

I enjoyed reading the above poem - it's witty and fun. Shouldn't it read 'thank your lucky stars' in the final lines? I noticed the poet's poem about the moon and enjoyed that too.

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